Friday, August 14, 2015

Writing Term 3


Writing Progressions 1P:
I am learning to

  • add some detail to my writing
  • choose words to make my writing more interesting
We wrote about about a Kapa Haka Performance that we watched in the auditorium during Māori Language Week.  First we wrote 2 sentences and then the next day we added some more writing to make our stories more interesting.

"I like to write about race cars.  I use the word card and then I can go back and have a look at what the teacher wrote and then I copy it.  I am a good writer."
Māia

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Keep working hard on your story writing Māia.